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                  Workgroup


      The PROTO Process: Working Group Chair Document Shepherding
           <draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding-01.txt>
              draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding-03

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Abstract


   This

   The methodologies described in this document describes a pilot implementation of have been designed to
   facilitate a protocol change
   within the IETF.  The essence transition in IETF document flow processing.  A set of
   processes and procedures, known as the change is to have workgroup
   chairs more involved PROTO process, are specified
   in which a working group chair serves as the progress of the primary document after the
   workgroup and
   shepherd for a document editor have handed over which has been submitted to the document IESG for
   publication.  The activities involved in  Note that this are: 1) providing a
   writeup role has traditionally been filled by



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   the AD responsible for the document, to accompany working group.

   The shepherd's responsibilities include:

   1.  Providing the request for publication
   which write-up accompanying a document that is sent forwarded
       to the secretariat IESG for publication.  Note that this write-up had
       traditionally been provided by the "Shepherding Area Director".
       Under the processes and procedures described here, the ADs (Area Directors); 2)
   following working
       group chair provides this write-up.

   2.  Following up on AD Evaluation comments on a draft to the authors and
   workgroup; working
       group, and 3) following

   3.  Following up on all IESG comments (DISCUSS comments as
   well as other) on ("DISCUSSes") related to the
       shepherded draft.







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Table of Contents

   1.  Introduction


   As part of the currently ongoing effort to improve the work flow
   (particularly speed of approval) of documents, the  PROTO team
   [PROTO] is defining pilot projects to test possible protocol changes.
   This document describes such a pilot.


   The purpose of the pilot described here is to test offloading
   follow-up work which an Area Director (AD) traditionally has done.
   This includes both follow-up after the AD has read through and
   evaluated a document submitted to the IESG for publication, and
   follow-up on IESG comments (DISCUSS comments . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  4
   2.  Terminology  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  5
   3.  Process Description  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  5
     3.1   WG Chair Write-Up for Publication Request  . . . . . . . .  5
     3.2   AD Review Shepherding  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  7
     3.3   IESG Discuss Shepherding . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  9
   4.  When Not to Use PROTO  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
   5.  Security Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
   6.  Acknowledgments  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
   7.  IANA Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
   8.  Informative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
       Authors' Addresses . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13
   A.  Working documents  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13
       Intellectual Property and Copyright Statements . . . . . . . . 14



































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1.  Introduction

   Early in 2004, the IESG undertook several experiments aimed at
   evaluating whether any of the proposed changes to the IETF document
   flow process would yield qualitative improvements in document
   throughput and others) quality.  One such experiment, referred to as PROTO
   [PROTO], is a set of methodologies designed to involve the working
   group chairs more directly in their documents' approval life cycle.
   In particular, the PROTO team focused on that part of the document's
   life cycle which occurs after the working group and document editor
   would have traditionally forwarded the document to the IESG for
   publication.

   The methodologies developed and piloted by the PROTO team (hereafter
   referred to as the "PROTO process" or simply "PROTO") focus on the
   working group chair as the primary document shepherd.  In this
   context, the shepherd's responsibilities include:

   1.  Providing the write-up accompanying a
   document.  It is hoped document that offloading has been
       forwarded to the IESG for publication.  This write-up had
       traditionally been provided by the "Shepherding Area Director".
       Under PROTO, the Working Group Chair provides this onto write-up.

   2.  Following up on AD Evaluation comments to the authors and working
       group, and

   3.  Following up on all IESG comments ("DISCUSSes") related to the chair (or one
       shepherded draft.

   By the end of 2004, the IESG had evaluated the chairs) utility of the workgroup PROTO
   methodologies based on data obtained though several pilot projects
   which submitted had run throughout the draft will increase year, and subsequently decided to adopt
   the speed PROTO process.

   The primary objective of follow-up the PROTO process is to improve document
   throughput and quality by enabling a partnership between the
   Responsible Area Director and the transparency Shepherding Working Group Chair (or
   her/his designee).  In particular, this partnership has the explicit
   goal of empowering the process, and
   reduce Shepherding WG Chair while at the workload same time
   offloading a specific part of the AD to boot.  The pilot does not cover follow-up for drafts work which do not originate in a workgroup.


   For a discussion had
   traditionally been responsibility of the reasoning underlying piloting of process
   changes, see [JULY14].


2.  Pilot description


2.1  Participants


   This pilot involves Responsible Area Directors of selected areas, and some or all
   of Director.
   As such, PROTO has been scoped to include both the chairs for which follow-up after
   the Responsible Area Director is Area Advisor.


2.2  Running time has read through and pilot size


   This pilot evaluated a
   document submitted to the IESG for publication, as well as follow-up
   on all IESG comments on a document (i.e., DISCUSSes).  Finally, it is
   important to be run note that PROTO does not less than 4 months, and cover follow-up for drafts
   which do not more than 8
   months, unless early experience shows it to be clearly detrimental.
   It originate in a working group.




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   The remainder of this document is expected that it will be started shortly after organised as follows: Section 3
   outlines the IETF 60
   meeting, and completed in time for overall PROTO process.  Section 3.1 describes the results to be reported at
   write-up which accompanies the
   IETF 62 meeting.  The pilot should be run with no fewer than 5
   workgroups, up to publication request, Section 3.2
   describes the number that ADs AD Review shepherding process, and WG Chairs feel mutually
   they can support.


   The running time Section 3.3
   describes IESG Discuss Shepherding.  Finally, Section 4 describes
   those cases in which the PROTO process should not be chosen such that the participating ADs used.

2.  Terminology

   The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
   "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and
   WG chairs have opportunity "OPTIONAL" in this
   document are to get past the initial learning and
   first-time execution barrier, be interpreted as described in BCP 14, RFC 2119
   [RFC2119].

3.  Process Description

   The PROTO process involves Area Directors of selected areas, and get some familiarity with
   or all of the
   process before chairs for which the pilot Area Director is closed and evaluated.


3.  Process Description Area Advisor.

   The PROTO process changes described in this draft can be is divided into three tasks:





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   o  Doing a WG Chair Writeup Write-Up for a document, described in Section 3.1 document (Section 3.1),

   o  Following up on AD review comments, described in Section 3.2 comments (Section 3.2), and

   o  Following up on IESG DISCUSS comments, described in Section 3.3 comments (Section 3.3)


3.1  WG Chair Writeup Write-Up for Publication Request

   When a draft is ready to be submitted for publication, it is the task
   of the shepherding workgroup chair Shepherding WG Chair to do a document writeup write-up for the draft.

   There are two parts to this task.  First, the chairs need to answer Shepherding WG Chair
   answers questions 1.a to 1.h below so that to give the responsible Responsible Area
   Director can
   get insight into the working group process as applied to this
   draft.
   These  Note that while these questions may appear redundant in some cases but
   cases, they are written to elicit any tidbits of information that the AD should must be
   aware of.
   (Pointers of (to this end, pointers to relevant entries in the WG archive
   will be helpful.) helpful).  The goal here is to inform the AD about any issues
   that may have come up in IETF meetings, on the mailing list, or in
   private communication that they should be aware of prior to taking this draft to IESG.
   Don't be surprised if IESG
   evaluation of the AD has further questions. shepherded draft.  Any significant issues mentioned
   in the questionnaire will probably lead to a
   followup follow-up discussion
   with the AD.

   The second part of the task is to prepare the "Protocol Writeup" Write-Up"
   which is dually used first as both for the ballot writeup write-up for the IESG telechat and then



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   for the the IETF-wide protocol announcement.  Item number 1.i
   describes the elements of the writeup.  For guidance for those who haven't done
   this before, try looking at write-up.  Please see other protocol
   announcements (in in the IETF Announce archive) and expect some comments from the AD on the draft. archive for examples of such
   write-ups.

   1.a) Have the chairs personally reviewed this version of the ID Internet
        Draft (ID), and in particular, do they believe this ID is sufficiently baked ready
        to forward to the IESG for publication?

   1.b) Has the document had adequate review from both key WG members
        and key non-WG members?  Do you have any concerns about the
        depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed?

   1.c) Do you have concerns that the document needs more review from a
        particular (broader) perspective (e.g., security, operational
        complexity, someone familiar with AAA, etc.)?

   1.d) Do you have any specific concerns/issues with this document that
        you believe the ADs and/or IESG should be aware of?  For
        example, perhaps you are uncomfortable with certain parts of the




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        document, or have concerns whether there really is a need for
        it, etc.  If
        it.  In any event, if your issues have been discussed in the WG
        and the WG has indicated it that it still wishes to advance the document anyway, note
        if you continue to have concerns.
        document, detail those concerns in the write-up.

   1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it
        represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with
        others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and
        agree with it?

   1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme
        discontent?  If so, please summarise what are they upset about. the areas of conflict in
        separate email to the Responsible Area Director.

   1.g) Have the chairs verified that the document adheres to _all_ all of the
        ID nits? (see http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html).

   1.h) Does Is the document a) split references into normative/
        informative, normative and b) are informative references?
        Are there normative references to IDs, where the IDs are not
        also ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? (Note:
        (note here that the RFC editor will not publish an RFC with
        normative references to IDs, it will delay publication until all
        such IDs are also ready for publication as RFCs.)

   1.i) For Standards Track and BCP documents, the IESG approval
        announcement includes a writeup write-up section with the following
        sections:




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        *    Technical Summary

        *    Working Group Summary

        *    Protocol Quality

   1.j) Please provide such a writeup.  (We will hopefully use it as is,
        but may make some changes.) For recent examples, have a look at write-up.  Recent examples can be found in
        the "protocol action" announcements for approved documents.

   1.k) Note:

        *    When doing the technical summary, one would expect that the    The relevant information is for the technical summary can
             frequently be found in the abstract and/or introduction of
             the document.  It turns out  If not, this may be an indication that the step of producing
             the writeup sometimes points out there
             are deficiencies in the
             introduction/abstract that are also worthy of rectifying. abstract or introduction.

        *    For the Working Group Summary, was Summary: Was there anything in WG
             process that is worth noting? (E.g., For example, was there
             controversy about particular points, decisions where
             consensus was




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        *    For the protocol quality, useful information could include: includes:

             +    is    Are there existing implementations of the protocol already being implemented? protocol?

             +    have    Have a significant number of vendors indicated they
                  plan to implement the spec? specification?

             +    are    Are there any reviewers (during the end stages) that merit explicit special mention as
                  having done a thorough review (i.e., that resulted in
                  important changes or a conclusion that the document was fine (except
                  had no substantive issues)?

   The questionnaire and write-up is sent to the ADs and
   iesg-secretary@ietf.org with a request to publish the document.  The
   questionnaire and write-up, minus any discussion of possible appeals,
   is also sent to the working group mailing list.  The publication
   request SHOULD also indicate which chair will be shepherding the
   document (this will be entered into the ID Tracker [IDTRACKER]).  In
   addition to making life easier for
                  maybe some nits?) the ADs, this lets the IETF chair
   know where to send Gen-ART [GEN-ART] reviews.

3.2  AD Review Shepherding

   The steps for workgroup working group chair shepherding of AD reviews are as
   follows:





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   2.a) If there is more than one chair, the chairs decide on which one
        should be responsible for ensuring that the needed fixes are
        done when the AD returns comments.  This can for instance MUST be done at the time before the
        publication request is sent.  It is
        important sent, so that this is the information can be
        included in the request, as mentioned above.  This MUST be an
        explicit agreement. agreement among the working group chairs.

   2.b) The AD reads, evaluates and writes comments pretty much as
        before.  However, note that since on the communication between AD
        and authors draft (as is not direct, the need for clear and
        well-articulated review comments is somewhat larger.
        case when not using PROTO).

   2.c) Depending on the magnitude of the issues found (and other
        considerations?), found, the AD returns
        the full review to the chairs, and requests that either:

        *    that further workgroup    Further editorial work must be undertaken to put done on the document into shape to before
             it can be published published, or,

        *    that authors and workgroup are informed of    ID Nits must be fixed before the issues found
             and resolve them in a document before it can be
             published, or

        *    A revised draft


        * is is required to resolve issues that the authors fix nits as needed. have
             been found in subsequent IESG review.

        As covered below, the comments will be posted to the workgroup working
        group mailing list.  The comments will normally also be posted
        by the AD in the ID Tracker [IDTRACKER].  Working groups that
        use issue tracking should also record the issues (and eventually
        their




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   2.d) The chair responsible Shepherding WG Chair reads through the AD Evaluation
        comments, making very certain that all comments are understood,
        so that it is possible to follow up on them with the authors and workgroup.
        working group.  If there is some uncertainty as to what is
        requested, this must be resolved with the Area Director.

   2.e) The responsible chair Shepherding WG Chair sends the comments to the author(s) and
        to the workgroup working group mailing list, in order to have a permanent
        record of the comments.  It is recommended that the chair
        solicit from the author(s) an estimate on when the fixes will be done - i.e.,
        done, that is, when the submission of a revised draft can be expected.

   2.f) When incorporating the fixes in the new version of the draft, it
        is strongly recommended RECOMMENDED that the revising editor keep a summary list showing how the issues were addressed
        each issue by issue, was addressed and showing what the revised text is.  If such a list
        It is strongly RECOMMENDED that this list be forwarded to the AD
        Responsible Area Director with the revised draft, it will make it possible for
        the AD to verify the fixes very quickly. draft.






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   2.g) The responsible chair follows-up, nudges and Shepherding WG Chair iterates until with the authors (and workgroup working
        group if required) has fixed until the outstanding issues found, have been
        resolved and submitted an updated draft. a revised draft has been submitted.  At this point,
        the AD is notified of the revised draft, and provided with the summary list of issues
        and resulting text changes.

        In the event that the working group disagrees with a comment
        raised by the AD or has already previously considered and dismissed the
        issue, the Shepherding WG Chair MUST resolve the issue and
        previously ruled it out, this must be discussed and resolved with the
        AD before the new version of the a revised draft is can be submitted.

   2.h) The Area Director verifies that the issues he found during AD
        Evaluation are resolved by the new version of the draft.

   2.i) (Hopefully, that's it, but The shepherding process normally terminates at this point.
        However, in the worst case this starts over at
        1 again...) event that no resolution can be found, the
        process goes to 1.  above (i.e., essentially restarts).


3.3  IESG Discuss Shepherding

   In this section we detail the steps that a shepherding Shepherding WG chair Chair will
   take in resolving the DISCUSS items against a given ID.  The steps
   are given below, in the order that they are to be executed.  Note
   that occasionally DISCUSSes are written in a manner that makes their
   primary intent unclear.  In these cases, the Shepherding WG Chair
   (and possibly the document editor)  and DISCUSSing AD SHOULD meet
   (either in person or electronically) to resolve the issue.  In
   addition, the Responsible Area Director SHOULD be notified of the
   meeting.  If this process fails to clarify or resolve the DISCUSS,
   the Shepherding WG Chair MAY further involve the Responsible Area
   Director in the resolution process.

   3.a) Immediately after the weekly IESG conference call, the
        shepherding
        Shepherding WG chair Chair queries the ID tracker [IDTRACKER] to
        collect any DISCUSS comments raised against the ID.  In order to




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        accomplish this, the shepherding Shepherding WG chair's Chair's email address must
        be is
        added to the "State Change Notice To:" field in the ID tracker.
        This will result in an email to the shepherding Shepherding WG
        chair Chair when
        the document is moved changes state from the "IESG Evaluation" state to
        one of the states requiring Shepherd actions: ("IESG actions (i.e., "IESG
        Evaluation: Revised ID Needed", "IESG Evaluation: AD Followup").
        This notification indicates to the the shepherding Shepherding WG chair Chair that
        the DISCUSS comments have been registered.

        Note that there may be exceptional cases when DISCUSS comments
        are registered after the IESG teleconference.  In these cases,
        the DISCUSSing AD should notify the shepherding Shepherding WG chair Chair that



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        new comments have been entered.

   3.b) The shepherding Shepherding WG chair Chair analyses comments from the tracker, and
        initialises contact with any AD's who have placed comments
        (blocking or non-blocking) on a draft, notifying them the draft that is being
        shepherded.  In particular, the
        shepherding Shepherding WG chair Chair MUST notify
        the relevant ADs that the Shepherding WG Chair is the current
        document shepherd and
        seeking any additional clarification necessary to understand the
        comment. shepherd.  Note that the responsible AD must Responsible Area Director MUST
        be copied on this correspondence.

        +------+  Comments     +--------+  Comments      +-------+
        | (3.a)| ------------> |  (3.b) | -------------> | (3.c) |
        +------+  Collected    +--------+  Understood    +-------+
                                /|\   |
                                 |    | Comments not fully understood
                                 |    | (Further AD/shepherding AD/Shepherding WG
                                 |    |  chair  Chair Discussion Required)
                                 |    |
                                 +----+

   3.c) The shepherding Shepherding WG chair Chair then coordinates DISCUSS comments, and
        builds a a consistent interpretation of the comments.  This step
        may require iteration with step (2).  above.  That is:

        +------+   Consistent     +-------+
        | (3.b)| ---------------> | (3.c) |
        +------+ Interpretation   +-------+
          /|\                         |
           |                          | Further AD/shepherding AD/Shepherding WG
           |                          | chair Discussion Required Chair discussion required
           +--------------------------+

   3.d) The DISCUSS comments are then communicated to the working group.

   3.e) After the author(s) resolve the issues provided by the
        shepherding
        Shepherding WG chair Chair (i.e., the distilled summarised DISCUSS issues), the
        shepherding
        Shepherding WG chair Chair reviews the updated document to ensure that




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        (in her/his option) the DISCUSS issues have been resolved.

        Note that the shepherding Shepherding WG chair Chair may also propose resolutions
        to these issues, file them in an issue tracker, or do other
        steps to streamline the resolution of the comments.

   3.f) The shepherding Shepherding WG chair Chair communicates the resolution-so-far to
        the responsible AD and the DISCUSSing AD(s).






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   3.g) DISCUSSing AD removes DISCUSS comment, or tells the shepherding
        chair Shepherding
        WG Chair and adds information to the I-D ID tracker about explaining why
        the comment is not resolved.  The shepherd Shepherding WG Chair informs
        the workgroup working group accordingly.

        If the DISCUSS comment in question was not resolved to the
        satisfaction of the DISCUSSing AD(s) and responsible ADs, Responsible Area
        Director, two possibilities exist:

        (a)  The process returns to step (3.c), or

        (b)  If no progress can be made on the resolution of the DISCUSS
             with the DISCUSSING AD, despite clarification and
             additional involvement of the Responsible AD, Area Director,
             the
             shepherding Shepherding WG chair Chair and the WG might at last resort
             consider an appeal in accordance with the procedures
             described in RFC 2026 [RFC2026] and referred to in RFC 2418
             [RFC2418].

        Otherwise, the process continues with step (3.h).


   3.h) The responsible AD moves document to APPROVED state, or if the
        changes are deemed significant, there is a short new WG last
        call, and then the document goes to the IESG for re-review.



4.  Wrap-up


   At the end of the pilot lifetime, it is expected that an evaluation
   of the experienced benefits is made, using input solicited from the
   participating Area Directors and Workgroup Chairs by means of an
   email questionnaire, web-page form or something similar.  The
   questions are given below, in Section 4.2.  A per-review
   questionnaire is also provided in Section 4.1.


4.1  Questionnaire to be done after each individual AD Review


   To be done by both WG Chair and AD.





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   R1.  I'm submitting this questionnaire as
         1. the process continues with step (3.h).

   3.h) The Responsible Area Director
         2.  Workgroup Chair


   R2.  Document name:


   R3. moves document to APPROVED state,
        or if the changes are deemed significant, there may be a new WG Chair shepherding of this draft speeded up
        last call.  Finally, the procedure:
         1.  Strongly disagree
         2.  Disagree
         3.  Undecided document goes to the full IESG for
        re-review.


4.  Agree
         5.  Strongly agree


   R4.  WG Chair shepherding of this draft resulted  When Not to Use PROTO

   As mentioned above, there are several cases in which the comments
         being resolved in a satisfactory manner: PROTO
   process SHOULD NOT be used.  These include

   1.  Strongly disagree
         2.  Disagree
         3.  Undecided
         4.  Agree
         5.  Strongly agree


   R5.  WG Chair shepherding of this draft resulted  Those cases in a more
         transparent process:
         1.  Strongly disagree
         2.  Disagree
         3.  Undecided
         4.  Agree
         5.  Strongly agree


   R6. which the WG Chair shepherding chair primary document author or
       editor, or the WG chair is the primary author or editor of this draft resulted in a more
         well-documented process:
         1.  Strongly disagree
         2.  Disagree
         3.  Undecided
         4.  Agree
         5.  Strongly agree


   R7.  The interaction with
       large percentage of the document editors in resolving documents produced by the
         comments worked out well:
         1.  Strongly disagree working group,

   2.  Disagree
         3.  Undecided
         4.  Agree
         5.  Strongly agree








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   R8.  - Public Comments?


   R9.  - Comments to IESG and PROTO-Team only?


   R10.  Those cases in which the Responsible Area Director expects
       communication difficulties with the WG Chair shepherding of this draft worked out well, overall:
         1.  Strongly disagree
         2.  Disagree
         3.  Undecided
         4.  Agree
         5.  Strongly agree


   R11.  - Public Comments?


   R12.  - Comments chair (either due to IESG
       experience, strong views stated by the chair, or other issues),
       and PROTO-Team only?



4.2  Questionnaire for

   3.  Those cases in which the Pilot as a Whole


   To working group itself is either very old,
       losing energy, or winding down.  i.e., those cases in which it
       would not be done by both WG Chair and AD.


   X1.  I'm submitting this questionnaire as
         1. productive to initiate new processes or procedures.

   Finally, note these guidelines are intended to help the Responsible
   Area Director
         2.  Workgroup Chair


   X2.  I clearly understood what was expected of me in this pilot.
         1.  Strongly disagree
         2.  Disagree
         3.  Undecided
         4.  Agree
         5.  Strongly agree


         Comments?


   X3.  What is your evaluation of determine when to use the benefit of PROTO process.  The final
   determination as to whether to use the procedure you've
         tried out in this pilot?
         1.  Definitely harmful
         2.  Somewhat harmful
         3.  Mixed feelings
         4.  Somewhat beneficial
         5.  Definitely beneficial


         Comments?










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   X4.  What is your evaluation of the added effort required for the
         procedure you've tried out in this pilot?
         1.  Major increased effort
         2.  Somewhat increased
         3.  No change
         4.  Somewhat decreased effort
         5.  Major decreased effort


         Comments?


   X5.  Considering all factors, this procedure should be made the
         normal way of handling documents.
         1.  Strongly disagree
         2.  Disagree
         3.  Undecided
         4.  Agree
         5.  Strongly agree


         Comments?


   X6.  What do you consider to be the major advantages of this
         procedure change?


   X7.  What do you consider


   to be the major disadvantages of this
         procedure change?


   X8.  How would you change the procedure to minimise the
         disadvantages?


   X9.  Comments to the IESG and PROTO-Team only: Responsible Area Director's discretion.

5.  Security Considerations

   This document specifies a pilot implementation of a change in to IETF document flow procedures.  It does not raise or consider any
   As such, it neither raises nor considers protocol-specific security
   issues.  When evaluating the result of the pilot, the IESG
   should check if the changes has reduced the quality of security
   review and consideration for protocols, and take this into
   consideration when deciding whether the changes should be made
   permanent.

6.  Acknowledgments


   The content of this

   This document is based on contributions from the whole product of PROTO team, not only the named authors; specifically : Aaron Falk, which includes authors as
   well as Allison Mankin, Bill Fenner, Barbara Fuller, and Margaret
   Wasserman.
   Thanks are due to all for the PROTO team work of which this

7.  IANA Considerations

   This document




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   is a result.


7 creates no new requirements on IANA namespaces or other
   IANA requirements.

8.  Informative References

   [RFC2026]  Bradner, S., "The Internet Standards Process -- Revision
              3", BCP 9, RFC 2026, October 1996.

   [RFC2028]  Hovey, R. and S. Bradner, "The Organizations Involved in
              the IETF Standards Process", BCP 11, RFC 2028, October
              1996.

   [RFC2119]  Bradner, S., "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate
              Requirement Levels", BCP 14, RFC 2119, March 1997.

   [RFC2418]  Bradner, S., "IETF Working Group Guidelines and
              Procedures", BCP 25, RFC 2418, September 1998.


   [JULY14]   Klensin, J. and S. Dawkins, "A model for IETF Process
              Experiments", draft-klensin-process-july14-02 (work in
              progress), April 2004.


   [SIRS]     Carpenter, B. and D. Crocker, "Careful Additional Review
              of Documents (CARD)by Senior IETF Reviewers  (SIRS)",
              draft-carpenter-solution-sirs-01 (work in progress), June
              2003.

   [IDTRACKER]
              "The IETF Draft Tracker", Web
              Application:
              https://datatracker.ietf.org/. https://datatracker.ietf.org/, 2004.

   [PROTO]    "The IESG Process and Tools (PROTO) Team", Web
              Page:
              http://psg.com/~mrw/PROTO-Team. http://psg.com/~mrw/PROTO-Team, 2004.

   [GEN-ART]  "The General Area Review Team (GEN-ART)", Web
              Page: http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/review-guidelines.
              html, 2004.







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Authors' Addresses

   Aaron Falk

   Email: falk@isi.edu


   Henrik Levkowetz
   Torsgatan 71
   Stockholm  S-113 37
   SWEDEN

   Phone: +46 708 32 16 08
   EMail:
   Email: henrik@levkowetz.com


   David Meyer


   EMail:
   1225 Kincaid St
   Eugene, OR  97403
   USA

   Phone: +1.541.346.1747
   Email: dmm@1-4-5.net







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   Aaron Falk


   EMail: falk@isi.edu

Appendix A.  Working documents

   (This section should be removed by the RFC editor before publication)

   The current working documents for this draft are available at this
   web site:

   http://ietf.levkowetz.com/drafts/proto/wgchair-doc-shepherding/








































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